Whisky
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Post by Whisky on Aug 24, 2010 15:29:07 GMT -5
I was planning or had this idea for a side story that was to involve the Support Vessel, UNSC Spirit of Fire (CFV-88). The story takes place right at the end of Halo: Dark Storm Rising. Story Link Here if you have not seen it: www.fanfiction.net/s/5823528/1/Halo_Dark_Storm_RisingMy story summery you can call it down here. Summery: The war between the Galactic empire and the newly rebuilt U.N.S.C. has begun. With the forth Battle of Harvest over, UNSC prepares for a bold offensive operation across several fronts spread across the Galactic Empire. But as plans are made, and preparation's are made, the UNSC High Command call's in the near legendary UNSC Naval reserve Captain Allen Rodriguez to take command of a call upon elite unit, and the newly refitted, and rebuilt Spirit of Fire to go behind enemy lines to pave the way for invasion.
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Post by The Doctor on Aug 24, 2010 15:30:16 GMT -5
the Galactic empire would smash the UNSC...FYI
but it does sound cool
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Post by Jedi Matt on Aug 24, 2010 15:40:25 GMT -5
What era of the Empire?
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Post by Whisky on Aug 24, 2010 16:01:56 GMT -5
First Person: Not without a good fight. But thanks. Sorry if I may put this in the wrong place. Jedi: The beginning of the Galactic Empire ===== I planned to start the story near the end of the story at the near end of the Fourth Battle of Harvest. Major Austin Weeks UNSC Marine Corps long time veteran, and hero of three past wars from battling the Insurrectionists in operation tribute, to the great war with the so called Covenant, to the UNSC fighting along side the old republic against the CIS before and during the rise of an empire. The Major was originally assigned to guard a vital mobile artillery in East Asgard, before a damage Gunship did a kamikaze on it, destroying the tank, killing it's entire crew, and several troops station around it to protect it that were to late to get out of the way. By then the Empire Ground Forces thanks to there new AT-AT walkers had cut through East Asgard forcing their forces to pull back across a bridge to West Asgard. The Major, and his men were cut off from the bridge. With no mean's to escape the best bet was to find a place to dig in, and hold out as long as they can for a miracle. The Major cut through the street's by himself to meet up with a pair of Marine Corp Engineers on the other side of the street only to have a AT-ST pop out of no where on them, fire leasers, and rockets into the building behind killing his entire squad dug into a burned out building covering the old man right them. The Major makes it to the two, and they run through the buildings and side streets, till they are finally pin down in the city center, running low on ammo and surrounded by snipers on all sides hiding all inside the surrounding buildings. That's were I planned to begin this crazy story at. Any question's? I know you have as I have questions. And I'm the one who came up with this.
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Post by Jedi Matt on Aug 24, 2010 16:04:49 GMT -5
At the beg? Than yes there should be a decent fight. Later on? Noooo. Lol
Hmmm when did you plan on starting?
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Post by Whisky on Aug 24, 2010 16:22:30 GMT -5
At the beg? Than yes there should be a decent fight. Later on? Noooo. Lol Hmmm when did you plan on starting? Now just wanted to go over the details, and I forget several military words like: Oscar Mike. I have weapon and upgrade idea's on the board for my beloved Spirit of Fire. Promise will not really scratch the ships paint job. By the way look of Captain Rodriguez. How would you describe this guy me not good at describing people. ^_^' Hehe. But this is like a little like directly right after this.
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Post by Jedi Matt on Aug 24, 2010 16:48:08 GMT -5
Cool beans. Can't wait to read your stuff!
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Post by The Doctor on Aug 24, 2010 16:49:14 GMT -5
lol @ a the Terminator quote.
Halo meets star wars meets Terminator? wow
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Post by Whisky on Aug 24, 2010 17:01:07 GMT -5
lol @ a the Terminator quote. Halo meets star wars meets Terminator? wow Whoa hate to burst you bubble but no terminator, I may use the lines, and the characters but this is Halo, Star Wars... For now. One bold step at a time.
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Post by Jedi Matt on Aug 24, 2010 17:02:21 GMT -5
lol @ a the Terminator quote. Halo meets star wars meets Terminator? wow Whoa hate to burst you bubble but no terminator, I may use the lines, and the characters but this is Halo, Star Wars... For now. One bold step at a time. Hah, that would be awesome
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Post by Grand Admiral Talos on Aug 24, 2010 17:05:34 GMT -5
Whoa hate to burst you bubble but no terminator, I may use the lines, and the characters but this is Halo, Star Wars... For now. One bold step at a time. Hah, that would be awesome SW/Terminator/Halo? Maybe but it would take a very skilled author to pull it off, I could do it *maybe* but to be honest it would be far too much effort fusing the three realities and sorting everything out etc, etc.
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Post by The Doctor on Aug 24, 2010 17:06:40 GMT -5
Terminator gets sent into the Future were he meets Chief. he has to protect him as the empire invades?
sounds cool
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Post by Jedi Matt on Aug 24, 2010 17:06:46 GMT -5
Hah, that would be awesome SW/Terminator/Halo? Maybe but it would take a very skilled author to pull it off, I could do it *maybe* but to be honest it would be far too much effort fusing the three realities and sorting everything out etc, etc. True you'd have to hold true to both universes, and in this case three universes.
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Post by Grand Admiral Talos on Aug 24, 2010 17:08:00 GMT -5
SW/Terminator/Halo? Maybe but it would take a very skilled author to pull it off, I could do it *maybe* but to be honest it would be far too much effort fusing the three realities and sorting everything out etc, etc. True you'd have to hold true to both universes, and in this case three universes. Yeah and that's where the headaches come in. Heck, I'm writing a Terminator/C&C Red Alert fic right now and that may eventually expand into the rest of the C&Cverse ( Tib-wars may join in) but I don't even wanna think of adding a new 'verse into it.
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Post by Whisky on Aug 24, 2010 17:21:25 GMT -5
Whoa this is a Halo/Star Wars story.
It's not like the UNSC will suddenly build battle droids? Are a few experimental something that is of great important?
Right now Spirit of Fire mission then, what ever.
Sound good.
Now anyone got any good idea's on how much noise I can make with just one ship or a small four ship Battle group. I mean Carrier Group sorry about that.
The Spirit of Fire is the command, and carrier ship, one support Cruiser, and just two Frigate escorts.
Or just still stick with the one large ship moving faster than even the Falcon.
The point of this operation is to keep the Empire of focus, wanting them to look here, and there, and make ship they don't look here.
Simple plan really.
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Post by Jedi Matt on Aug 24, 2010 17:28:34 GMT -5
I'm not sure. I'm not good with firepower calcs.
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Post by The Doctor on Aug 24, 2010 17:29:13 GMT -5
a MAC cannon is supose to be 1 teraton of something....
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Post by Whisky on Aug 24, 2010 17:31:54 GMT -5
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Post by The Doctor on Aug 24, 2010 17:33:29 GMT -5
what kind names are SecDef and SecState?
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Post by Grand Admiral Talos on Aug 24, 2010 17:34:49 GMT -5
what kind names are SecDef and SecState? Section Defence and Section States? Admittedly they would make much more sense as DefSec and StateSec
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Post by Whisky on Aug 24, 2010 17:38:08 GMT -5
what kind names are SecDef and SecState? Section Defence and Section States? Admittedly they would make much more sense as DefSec and StateSec It's secretary of defense, and secretary of state. I'm doomed.
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Post by Jedi Matt on Aug 24, 2010 17:46:00 GMT -5
Hey I'll wish you luck
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Post by Whisky on Aug 24, 2010 17:53:58 GMT -5
Hey I'll wish you luck To hell with it I'm going in. For Jimmy!!! By the way. Anyone know which way is the Galactic Empire is? Or do I follow the second star to the right, and keep straight on, till morning.
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Post by Jedi Matt on Aug 24, 2010 17:55:11 GMT -5
Hey I'll wish you luck To hell with it I'm going in. For Jimmy!!! By the way. Anyone know which way is the Galactic Empire is? Or do I follow the second star to the right, and keep straight on, till morning. Take a left at the one black hole and keep going until your in the Maw
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Post by Whisky on Aug 24, 2010 18:02:34 GMT -5
To hell with it I'm going in. For Jimmy!!! By the way. Anyone know which way is the Galactic Empire is? Or do I follow the second star to the right, and keep straight on, till morning. Take a left at the one black hole and keep going until your in the Maw What when I get to Maw do I turn towards the prototype Deathstar, or away?
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Post by Jedi Matt on Aug 24, 2010 18:06:20 GMT -5
Take a left at the one black hole and keep going until your in the Maw What when I get to Maw do I turn towards the prototype Deathstar, or away? Away. You don't want to go that direction.
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Post by Whisky on Aug 24, 2010 18:12:55 GMT -5
What when I get to Maw do I turn towards the prototype Deathstar, or away? Away. You don't want to go that direction. Got it Deathstar. Bad.
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Post by Jedi Matt on Aug 24, 2010 22:24:33 GMT -5
When u gonna start?
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Post by Whisky on Aug 25, 2010 1:12:46 GMT -5
Now. The construction of the story. Halo: The Bold Offensive Begins today. Hell it's about time.
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Post by Jedi Matt on Aug 25, 2010 9:26:50 GMT -5
Awesome I look forward to reading it.
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